Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Chapter 19

Another poem is coming your away after the next one and then the chapters will resume again for the third and final section.

Here is Chapter 19:

Chapter 19
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semi56 said...

Just a quick thought: It always seems like the guy named "George" is going to take it on the chin early on--sort of a foreshadowing thing. Oh, his name is George. He will die or suffer serious bodily harm. This is an interesting chapter. I like that George--limbless--still has the gumption to explain the missing pieces of the puzzle to the others. Shows his need for attention at the very least. I can say that I am still lost on Jack and what he is now and what he may become. I had predicted that Jack enjoys some kind of supreme powers and the question becomes the ultimate question: good v. evil. So, it appears with his companions this journey begins again--or continues-- and I think that is a good thing since you created these unbelievable worlds, but we have been stuck in this cellar-like room for entirely too long. What is going on outside. think of the dichotomy of what those on the inside know versus those outside this building. You have set up a nice progression here and I hope you take advantage of all the opportunities that lie ahead for you. The questions surrounding Jack are enormous and how you handle them will ultimately shape your work from here on out. Again, scene transitions offer tremendous opportunities for plot exploration but also to glimpse this world you created and the contrasts with what we have been allowed to see so far. I have to jet but hope this helps. Your work is solid. Keep it up
ms

June 11, 2008 at 2:55 PM

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